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    dots Submission Name: Fall into itdots
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    Author: Heidiluv
    ASL Info:    17/F/behind you
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 13/33/27
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 863



    Description:
       Sometimes it's easy to fall in love, but no one wants to think about what comes after a fall.


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    dotsFall into itdots
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    A world that's full of nothingness
    but everything just the same,
    The clouds aren't drifting up and away
    but back down from where they came.

    It was easy to stand up straight
    Or to be cradeled in your lap
    But now we're moving just as fast
    And everything else's a satrap.

    Gravity has missed it's place
    And reasoning's daydreaming
    Even though the stars are out
    Both our eyes are brightly beaming

    The air surrounds us like warm hands
    And makes ripples in your shirt
    It's romanitcly horrific
    So much comfort in a landing that hurts

    Can it really be this great
    To collaps up into space
    And see everything but the ground below
    While focused on your face?





    Submitted on 2008-01-03 13:16:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hi this was very different from what i have read on this site but in a good way

    good write
    sandmann
    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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