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Submission Name:
Fall into it
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Author:
Heidiluv
ASL Info:
17/F/behind you
Elite Ratio:
2.91 - 13/33/27
Words:
125
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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Sometimes it's easy to fall in love, but no one wants to think about what comes after a fall.
Fall into it
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A world that's full of nothingness
but everything just the same,
The clouds aren't drifting up and away
but back down from where they came.
It was easy to stand up straight
Or to be cradeled in your lap
But now we're moving just as fast
And everything else's a satrap.
Gravity has missed it's place
And reasoning's daydreaming
Even though the stars are out
Both our eyes are brightly beaming
The air surrounds us like warm hands
And makes ripples in your shirt
It's romanitcly horrific
So much comfort in a landing that hurts
Can it really be this great
To collaps up into space
And see everything but the ground below
While focused on your face?
Submitted on 2008-01-03 13:16:06
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hey hi this was very different from what i have read on this site but in a good way
good write
sandmann
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