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    dots Submission Name: A Child Of The Seadots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 1111/1235/613
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsA Child Of The Seadots
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    Her kiss a matchless grace is
    A gem to crown the Moon.
    Her golden hair is stunning,
    Huge eyes are filled with cunning,
    Her hair in pearls and lace is,
    She swims the blue lagoon.
    Her kiss a matchless grace is
    A gem to crown the Moon.

    I watch her swim the pale reef
    When night brings on the dark.
    I hear her sweet voice singing,
    With magic words she’s bringing
    An end to pain and stale grief,
    She rules the ray and shark.
    I watch her swim the pale reef
    When night brings on the dark.

    She is the child of water,
    Born deep and magically.
    My love she seeks to chasten,
    Though I am fain to hasten
    My passion for this daughter
    Born of this deep blue sea.
    She is the child of water,
    Born deep and magically.

    And now I have grown weary,
    The ocean claims its own.
    New grief has grown a flower,
    With sordid evil power,
    For all my days are dreary
    My happiness has flown,
    And now I have grown weary,
    The ocean claims its own.





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      Marvelous story and another delightful rhyming story that is absolutely a delight to read! A Sailor's enchantment and love for a Siren, and final submission! What a story theme! Those lovely Sirens have only to sing us a song or becon "come hither" and us mere guys are putty!

    Delightful, excellent story and poem!
    | Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This flows very nicely from one line, to the next. The images are absolutely stunning. The repetition used through out it, moves it along very well; like waves crashing to shore.
    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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