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    dots Submission Name: One Nation Under Guarddots
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    Author: gothicgirl
    ASL Info:    23/f/recreant world
    Elite Ratio:    3.49 - 127/111/48
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 870
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    Bytes: 1398



    Description:
       i wrote this in a vat of societys mishapes....


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    dotsOne Nation Under Guarddots
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    Made in China, discovery
    5 cents to the dollar
    Cheep
    So unlike life
    a nation dirt poor
    yet...melting pot
    USA, a democracy,
    a superpower
    Vote
    Why...
    Still waiting for change
    upper class
    hold upper hand
    one president
    a man,
    no a puppet
    without strings
    what do want to hear,
    truth...
    Only lies

    Liberty,
    Freedom
    within guidelines
    laws
    enforced by
    not guilty until proven
    not illegal until caught
    Criminal,
    on file for life
    mistakes
    held against,
    until you die
    Socialpathic government
    with to much power
    to handle
    a man for a man
    much harder to keep a life
    Fragile easy to take one
    blink
    seconds wasted
    education held high
    yet...
    meaningless

    Kids having kids
    growing
    to fast
    Childhood lost
    to trauma
    mindless play
    Idle chatter
    less to say
    Obesity of lazy America
    made everywhere
    but here
    yet...
    we are proud
    to stand for our flag
    Justice
    without reason
    for all
    another lie
    but what does it
    matter
    we're living to die.






    Submitted on 2008-01-03 15:39:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ,a good number of experiences make a person reflective and like aflood so many things come awash stench,froth,sea weed,dead fish all remain for anyone who comes after to gawk at yes I see how you see democracy and all the societal structures man erects,I have come to believe that if people run anything devoid of interests whatso ever it crumbles quickly and when the interests exists it conflicts,then war happens, then people suffer but if war is neccesary is it bad,or the path to better things,well today bad is tolerable and certain things frown upon in the 60s are money makers today porn and gay are good examples,let me stop here ,ur work is good but this world aint,but with poetry and stuff like this we correct mind sets,popular faulty opinions ,and re-volve society,but then what assures that a handful of pundits and socially conscious individuals can make life better,if anything we would eschew only those things that dont please us and unconsciously be biased over issues like obesity,welfare for unemployed,healthreforms,info bill,and gay issues expressions, moral of gist is nobody can run anything devoid of misappropriation ,mistakes,and laws that favour certain st of people over others, hope this aint too much#:-)
    | Posted on 2011-05-04 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]


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