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    dots Submission Name: Mixed Signalsdots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMixed Signalsdots
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    We play the game
    the game of love.
    Tag you're it
    you run away.
    Hide from my eyes
    within my view.
    I give chase,
    the games afoot.
    Elude and delude
    to escape from me.
    Your light turns green
    but I'm not sure.
    If it just means go
    or what are you waiting for.

    May 11,2004




    Submitted on 2004-06-26 14:07:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. it has some innocent, child-like feeling to it, but that's what we do when we're flirting. one step forward, one backward...
    don't add something. it's a great write. very well done.
    | Posted on 2004-06-27 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      still playing games with the ladies huh? for a man your age shame, shame. just kidding ya lol.anyway this is a good beganing, but I get the feeling that somethings missing here. you could make it longer too.
    | Posted on 2004-06-26 00:00:00 | by hotrodruss | [ Reply to This ]
      short and to the point! gotta love that! this is so typical of the flirting thing, one step up, one step back, turn your back... look over your shoulder, wink... cute poem!
    | Posted on 2004-06-26 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this poem. It reminded me of my past crushes. well the boys had crushes on me and i thought it was funny to see them do stupid things because of it lol. But i like this poem. I thought it was a great write. I'm adding it to my favorites
    Jan,
    | Posted on 2004-06-26 00:00:00 | by Jan | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha, this was a great write. I loved it. Sorta reminded me of my old crushes. The onces I had when I was a kid. I loved how you used the game of tag. Great Write!
    | Posted on 2004-06-26 00:00:00 | by jlpurvis2001 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is perfect. A really good illustration about what the beginning of a relationship and lust is really like. It really is a bad game of tag though...cause when you loose at it it seems to be more sad.
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by shmuzzelle | [ Reply to This ]



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