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    dots Submission Name: Trading Updots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 694
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 547



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       Just having a little fun with this one! You asked if this is me? Well, I'm not telling! :-)


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    dotsTrading Updots
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    Living long can take its toll
    on the body as a whole…
    Ugly thighs with cellulite,
    saggy skin, and bunioned feet.
    What a mess this body's in;
    wrinkles permeate its skin.
    Belly button's quite a pit.
    Drop a dime; it just might fit.
    Eyelids droop and so do boobs,
    hanging like two funnel tubes.
    Leave some space for lots of arse;
    need I say this part's not sparse.
    Exercise, count calories?
    Goodness, no. New body, please!





    Submitted on 2008-01-04 12:02:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! This was whimsical and delightfully funny! Laughter and humor; the best medicine! Bravo Gal!
    | Posted on 2008-01-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL. This was just too cute to pass up. Self-humor is the best, don't you think? If we can't laugh at ourselves then who can we laugh at? But then, this may not be about you at all but merely a 'people watching' excursion put on paper. Either way, it's funny. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I freakin love this one Sharon and I love you for displaying such whimical honesty. It's going immediately to the faves list.
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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