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    dots Submission Name: It took all day dots

    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIt took all day dots

    I took all day to write the
    words that would end my marriage.

    soon but not soon enough I will be free.

    Free to just be me.
    free to feel and express,
    just how my heart sees.

    The road I have been on has been long and hard,
    with very little rest along the way.
    even though the end is near,
    yet I still fear that It will never be.

    I look back on our life together
    and I see all that I was missing,
    in a love that should have lasted
    till the end of time now it's just the end.

    Submitted on 2008-01-04 22:07:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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