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    dots Submission Name: Send me an angeldots

    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 1129
    Average Vote:    3.6667
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       I had angels on the mind

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    dotsSend me an angeldots

    Send me an angel to wipe away the tears

    Send me an angel to chase away the fears

    Send me an angel to make me feel as warm as the sun

    Send me an angel to take away the gun.

    Send me an angel to destroy the blackheart

    Send me the angel who will make me a sweetheart

    Send me an angel to teach me how to love

    Send me an angel to who looks like a dove

    Send me an angel to who will make things right

    Send me the angel who will say goodnight.

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      Very smooth! Very clear message, and I think many people, including myself, can relate to it.
    A great read:)
    | Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by Mr.Seth | [ Reply to This ]
      Great poetry.I wanna see somemore of this work.keep it up, and try ur hardest maybe ull be famous one day,u never know i reckon u will.... read my storyies that i submitted!
    no.1 The tail of haiku kuma no.2 to like and to love

    hope u like em!

    always write wat u feel and whats around you.
    | Posted on 2008-01-05 00:00:00 | by yurishibuya123 | [ Reply to This ]

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