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    dots Submission Name: I hate the DMVdots
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    Author: Mark Huntsman
    ASL Info:    20/m/oh
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 13/11/13
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1333
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    Description:
       poetic anti-bureaucracy


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    dotsI hate the DMVdots
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    Oh damn.
    I feel lost-
    Like I'm on
    Safari &
    My crew got
    eaten alive by
    Jackals, but
    no-one had a gun.

    I try to
    run away but
    it's getting
    dark & I'm
    realizing that there's
    nothing around
    except a teeming
    jungle ready
    to swallow me
    whole if I'm
    not cautious
    at every
    turn.

    Now I'm not alone @
    the top of a mighty
    tree filled
    w/ Goliath Bird-Eating
    Tarantulas-
    they're hungry &
    even though I can't
    see I can feel
    them closing in on me.

    Escape death-
    yes.
    I'll Grip a fresh
    vine & swing
    down
    into a huge
    pile of palm
    fronds
    then run to
    the ocean.

    I can see a
    small village
    & it kind of looks
    like a man is being
    Stabbed in the
    asshole w/ a hot red
    spear for a smokin'
    rotissere dinner.
    Damn
    Cannibals...
    I think I'll
    go
    drown
    myself
    maybe I'll
    re-incarnate
    as a sea
    creature.




    Submitted on 2008-01-05 15:34:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ill return the favor for the com
    this is very intresting a good imagetion like the story but it is wierd but thats is wut is coool about it
    so mabey ttul
    Brennan
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by boya | [ Reply to This ]


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