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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsMusicdots
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    Relaxing the mind
    Passing the time
    Playing the role
    Of entertaining the soul
    Making life
    More enjoyable
    Seemingly free of strife
    Amazing
    That it creates such a lie
    Yet it serves as a lotion
    To heal the wounds of a rough day
    I know what it is in reality
    Quite simply
    It is
    Poetry in motion




    Submitted on 2008-01-05 16:40:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      After I comment this, I'm putting it on my favorites. I enjoy music so much and I think this is exactly how it is. It really just washes away everything for me. I love the beginning "Relaxing the mind, passing the time" Thats pretty much what it does.
    In the fourth line is that suppose to be Po or To?
    Thanks for sharing this! I look forward to reading your other pieces.
    -Inkpen
    | Posted on 2008-04-01 00:00:00 | by inkpen | [ Reply to This ]


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