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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Balance
    Peace
    Zen
    Words
    Created by men
    Words that coincide
    Mean the same thing
    But different concepts
    Times
    Places
    Eras
    Same species
    Same meaning
    But that's it
    The end to the similarities
    Balance within yourself
    Zen all around you
    Peace throughout the world
    What a world that would be
    What a dream
    If only wishes
    Could be reality




    Submitted on 2008-01-05 16:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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