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    dots Submission Name: Addictiondots
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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 898
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsAddictiondots
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    I need it
    This precious thing
    Inanimate
    Normally unimportant
    Thing
    Useless in normal life
    But now required
    In my very composition
    My genes
    My life has changed scenes
    From one thing
    To another
    Obsession
    Protectiveness
    Needless protection
    OCD
    Trying to live without it
    Impossible
    Realization kicks in
    It's addiction




    Submitted on 2008-01-05 16:41:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mmm I love the themes presented! very accurate & good flow & I admire brevity

    good read
    | Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by Mark Huntsman | [ Reply to This ]


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