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    dots Submission Name: Unrequited Lovedots
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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsUnrequited Lovedots
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    I've never said it aloud
    And probably never will
    Whenever you say my name
    It gives me secret thrills
    I see the way your eyes dance
    As you laugh at random things
    And though you do not know it
    I love it when you sing
    Your voice heals all wounds
    And takes all I have for me not to swoon
    At night as I lay down to dream
    It's always of you, as I lay there fresh and clean
    I cannot help but wonder certain things
    I wonder about your dreams
    Are they good, or bad
    Happy, or sad
    But all those things are forgotten
    As I walk through the doors
    For I gaze into your eyes
    And realize
    You are a friend
    Nothing more
    Because as much as I want more
    You don't
    And though it makes my heart ache
    I refuse to use force
    For in true love
    The decisions you make
    Are for the betterment of the other
    I guess it's just fate
    Keeping us apart
    You
    As a whole
    Remind me of a dove
    All that has caused is more
    More of this
    This unrequieted love




    Submitted on 2008-01-05 16:43:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg this is the best love poem i have read in my whole life. i love this boy named jake, i have known him for 2 till now(10th). he is my everything and i dont know who to let go. i have a bf whos name is mani and as much as i love im, hell never be a jake. jake was my best friend, as much as i wanted him to want me as more then a friend he never would, he would say hes not good enough 4 me and that he could never like me like that, so idk but as may times as he brakes my heart i still want him. maybe even more. when i told him how i really felt he stop bein my friend whic kills me even more, i know i love mani but no matter what there will always be a place for jake in my heart....so when i tell u this is good i do mean it, cuz that id every word i have in my heart about jake. this poem helped me today thank u. u are amazing with words keep it up...
    _tayla_
    | Posted on 2008-06-29 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]


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