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Didn't Think I'd Ever Feel This Alone


Author: WishingForMore
ASL Info:    17/f/virginia
Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0 /1 /2
Words: 198
Class/Type: Lyrics /BrokenHeart
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Didn't Think I'd Ever Feel This Alone



Didn't think I'd ever feel this alone

Missing hearing your voice over the phone

In a crowd full of people, I still can't be me

Seeing your face, getting weak in the knee



Chorus

Tears being to fall down my face

A smile develops on my lips to hide this terrible disgrace

I can't believe you'd choose her over me

I'm not good enough, wouldn't you agree?




So dark and cold I feel

Heart shattered and not knowing if I may heal

You took me away;

Away to a place of no dismay




Chorus

Tears being to fall down my face

A smile develops on my lips to hide this terrible disgrace

I can't believe you'd choose her over me

I'm not good enough, wouldn't you agree?




Didn't think I'd ever feel this alone

Missing hearing your voice over the phone

In a crowd full of people, I still can't be me

Seeing your face, getting weak in the knee




Submitted on 2008-01-06 19:51:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  its good
| Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by Evie | [ Reply to This ]


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