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    dots Submission Name: Oh Silence!dots
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    Author: Tropnevad
    ASL Info:    17/Male/????
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/0/7
    Words: 410
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 185
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       "...Precisely seven days and merely six nights ago
    I had given in to wrath on a mere flip of a dime.
    Precisely five days and merely four nights ago
    I abducted a child of my own blood from the bed of my own home.
    Precisely three days and merely two nights ago
    I removed my offsprings arms and legs..."


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    dotsOh Silence!dots
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    I sat alone in a large room.
    No other person could be seen aside from I.
    I sat precisely in the middle, upon a sturdy wooden chair.
    The light of the candles dancing off the walls.
    The sound of wood creaking filled the air.
    My eyes were locked upon a small table that laid inches from my face.
    Oh Silence, great silence! How I adore thee!

    My eyes transfixed upon a single plate.
    Or shall I say, what seemed to rest upon the plate
    And not the plate itself?
    For from the light of the flickering candles,
    That danced across the room in awe,
    I saw the shadow of some creature
    Glaring at me that plate.
    Oh Silence, great Silence! How I adore thee!

    I watched in wonder and sat in fear
    As the shadow of the unknown creature glared into my soul this day.
    Was I to know that it was fate?
    Dare I tempt myself to touch its face?
    For as I raced throughout my mind to find a face for this creature
    The event hit me with the force of a falling tree.
    And beneath such pressure I began to cry
    As the creature now came after me.
    Oh Silence, great Silence! How I adore thee!

    Precisely seven days and merely six nights ago
    I had given in to wrath on a mere flip of a dime.
    Precisely five days and merely four nights ago
    I abducted a child of my own blood from the bed of my own home.
    Precisely three days and merely two nights ago
    I removed my offsprings arms and legs
    Then fed my "missing" child to his mother as stew
    And watched as she consumed her meal with not even a smile on my face.
    Oh Silence, great Silence! How I adore thee!

    As the the creature grew so nearer
    I stared into its hateful eyes and quickly felt its pain.
    And as the creature took away my arms
    I simply begged it to make no noise.
    For I could never stand the sound of life.
    This was the cause of my offsprings disappearence.
    For a child whom made no noise was an angel to me.
    I even commented on how I thought that I'd never see the day
    When a child would be found within its mother
    Slowly digesting and flowing through her bowels.
    Oh Silence, great Silence! How I adore thee!




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