Description: And to my friends I will return the favor. They have done everything for me. Some you guys may even know. SanctityExposed, my favorite ESer, is included on this list. Leah, Dan, Ji, even the two Joshes to an extent. Nikki Marie, Mira B. Everyone who I trust with the covenant of a hug, I will fight for each and every day. We are in this boat together.
Some times.
The rain comes down and it’s like.
Yeah.
Haven‘t you wondered?.
Why the rain comes down so hard.
Why so hard?
You’ve prayed as hard, and still it falls harder.
Like every day.
Yeah.
And I see, sometimes, that light in your eyes go dim.
I know you’re thinking.
Stop that thinking.
Now is time to sleep.
Just go to sleep, it’s ok to sleep.
I’ll be here.
I offer you the hand cause I’m your friend.
And let that rain fall on my shoulder dear.
Hold me close and I’ll hold you near.
That’s why we’re here for.
It’s okay to cry.
That’s why I’m here for.
Yeah.
Not gonna say I know exactly how it feels
When hell falls down upon you.
It’s different from each view.
And the burden itself seems a sin
When you look at that trouble you’re in
But this is the boat we’ll both be sailin
Till the hurricane comes through.
When you’re tired I will row for you.
So cast away that tattered vale
I can see through the wool anyways.
Let me see those watery eyes,
And I will dry them my friend.
Like you dried mine a million times before.
I know and you will many more.
The storm is gonna go through.
And when it does I’ll be with you, singing
A sing song sing-along tune
I’ll close my eyes as if to say
And I do, each and every day
That someday
The sun will shine bright as it should be
It’ll be a warmer day and it’s like.
Yeah.
Wow, this is an amazing song. I kind of hear this "indie rock" sound in my head while listening to it. I loved the way you pieced together the lyrics, and your style overall. The song takes a bit of a turn halfway through, and the cant "yeah" like lyrics, open up to bigger more complex stanza's. I assume that at the point the pace and tone of the song change as well. I really enjoy this, especially the imagery. "Let the rain fall down on my shoulder dear" and "Its ok to sleep", it tells such a touching story. I think this is getting a +fav by me lol. Also if you ever record is somehow, I'd love to hear it.
once again although i have never seen your work before i am impressed with it wow you are really great! For 19 you have some serious talent i hope you do something amazing with it
I hope, one day, that this will be made into a song. Just like "Woke Up", it has such great potential.
Though, eighth stanza, fourth line: "The sun will whine bright as it should be" Gotta fix it! So's it can bees perfect!
But, on a more serious note. Amen, brother, amen. You've wiggled your way into my heart, and now I've got a heart worm. Love you, bud, and never forget that!
Wow, Flynneh. That was deep. And it made me cry. Do you mind if I send it to one of my friends? It portrays exactly what I've been feeling lately, but I just didn't know how to say it. But that's ok. You said it for me.
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