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    dots Submission Name: The Wardots
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    Author: orange dragon
    ASL Info:    19/M/LCC
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/3/2
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Dark
    Total Views: 662
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    Bytes: 599



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       Ughhh... Woman make life complicated and dangerous, but we will still always chase them.


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    dotsThe Wardots
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    A river of blood flowing down
    Mangled bodies stacked on the ground
    Angels on one side, Demons the other
    The men are dying, father, son, brother
    The Majestic lords send their mass
    The Demons send shards of glass
    The battle wages for years and years
    Men bleeding, dying, not facing their fears
    The gory scene is over a jewel
    The reason men live, their daily fuel
    More beautiful than flowers, than sky
    For this wonderful gift, all these men die
    The whole world begins to unfurl
    All because of one beautiful girl




    Submitted on 2008-01-07 09:28:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Alright...well, it's quite a small boy's fantasy...it's a decent enough attempt...keep writing, and you'll keep getting better.
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by Roberto Santos | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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