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    dots Submission Name: Purifying Lightdots
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    Author: orange dragon
    ASL Info:    19/M/LCC
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/3/2
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 841
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 277



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       Finally mastering that vice of yours. How did i do?


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    dotsPurifying Lightdots
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    Shining radiance, gleaming and bright
    Beautiful blindness brought on by this light
    All evil and guilt, shadow and shame
    Destroyed by beams of glorious flame
    Triumphant I rise, casting out my demon
    Forgetting my past, leaving a freeman




    Submitted on 2008-01-07 09:42:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Better than the last piece you attempted, I must say. You've got a good grasp of imagery, so keep using that in your poetry.
    Keep working on your stuff.
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by Roberto Santos | [ Reply to This ]
      this is simple and short but it really has a meaning to it and thats suprising usually when you read a short poem you think of how much more could be said but really you used words that said it all and i like this poem and really a good piece!!
    xoxoevie
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by Evie | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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