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    dots Submission Name: Tell Me Something.dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Rant/Love
    Total Views: 795
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       My husband's landlord broke into his studio and stole 19 gutiars,7 gutiar amps, 4 computer montors as well as 4 hard drives. 1 drumset, several MIXING and RECORDING bords (very expensive and high tech things)THEN JUST 12 HR AFTER FINDING OUT ABOUT HIS STUDIO HE FINDS OUT.. his two business parnters planned and plotted for 6months when they would break into two stores they invested money into and steal all that they could. Also withdrawling all money out of both accounts. Money that wasn't even my Husbands it was another business owner whom was interested in having his OWN "Wired Wirless" (Revol phone store)... Now my husband has literally lost all that he has worked hard for saved money up for... he's an honest hard working man why... why do these things happen?


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    Tell me something...
    Do you know the feeling of defeat?
    Are you familiar with the feeling of uselessness?
    Are you the type to kick someone when their down?
    Or are you the type to help them up, at their weakest point...

    I have done all I can...
    I have said all I can...

    Yet I feel as if I am extra weight on your shoulders...
    I do not do the justice that you need
    That your life depends on.

    Others have taken practically all that you have worked hard for.
    I am your Wife

    All I can do is "Be There"
    These People may get away with it...

    How will we bounce back from this?
    How can people do this to honest hard working people ... such as yourself Hun?

    How do these people sleep at night knowing what they have done?
    Knowing the repercussions it has on those who are deeply affected.

    I can't bear to wake up next to you anymore.
    Feeling as if you deserve more...deserve someone who can do more than just "Be There"

    How are WE going to get through this?




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      First of all you don't seem to understand just how powerful " just being there" can be!!!
    You are his wife, which means he is not in this alone,. YOU have his back YOU support him YOU are his sound board his rock his harbor, just as he has been yours,
    To take that away from him would be just as Malicious and just and wrong as what his partners and landlord have done, but worse., because you he trusts with himself.
    | Posted on 2009-07-06 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a nice rant, and I completely see where you're coming from. No one that is close to me or that I even know, has gone through anything such as this. It is truly terrible. Have you gone to the police about any of it?

    »MIss MIsery«
    | Posted on 2008-01-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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