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    dots Submission Name: For Each Otherdots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 733
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 778



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    dotsFor Each Otherdots
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    For Each Other

    My skin crawls to feel your breath,
    On my neck where kisses lain,
    My soul shudders in radiance,
    Chills run down my spine,
    Goosebumps brandishing flesh,
    Hearts beating faster,
    For the one thing they desire,
    Each other,

    When I’m missing you,
    My heart calls, longs,
    My lips tingle awaiting tomorrow’s kiss,
    When I can see you again,
    When I can fulfill my hunger,
    My pain,
    The best kind to have,

    Each time we’re apart,
    It feels like a piece of me is missing,
    Wishing you were here,
    Just to hold onto,
    Just for one more moment to linger,
    Our hearts still beating,
    For each other.




    Submitted on 2008-01-07 10:56:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is beautiful, Kay! Isn't love grand!! You have outstanding talent!
    | Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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