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Submission Name: You dots

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Author:	Realitywarp87
ASL Info:	25/M/FL
Elite Ratio:	3.1 - 27/53/63
Words:	83

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	753
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	465

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You

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I dream about you constantly
You're always on my mind
When I hear a voice behind me
It's your face I want to find

You send chills throughout my body
I feel my heart beat in my hand
And when I see you from across the room
I can hardly even stand

I just want to be around you
I just want to be your man
I just want to hear you love me
I just want to hold your hand

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