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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 621
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    Bytes: 352



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       i dont know a whole lot about life, but i do know, that i regret most the choices ive made in my life.


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    It’s all a shadow of a dark past,

    Leaping and bounding out of control,

    I hear but one sound,

    That of my heart,

    Fearing that all is lost,

    I shout, yes, I shout!

    To hear anything,

    ANYTHING,

    Other than the voice of my mistakes…




    Submitted on 2008-01-07 13:37:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The beating pulse of our heart often muted all other sounds. To your heart be true & find soul's peace & hope renew! Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-01-26 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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