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    dots Submission Name: Cocainedots
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    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 952
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 416



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    dotsCocainedots
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    Oh my God the rush,
    is like the devils touch,
    the needle kisses the vien.
    I fill up on Cocaine.


    Oh my god the rush,
    it costs so fucking much,
    once again I get high,
    as I watch my willpower die.


    oh my God the rush,
    pleasure almost too much,
    snowflakes in my vien,
    God I love Cocaine.






    Submitted on 2008-01-07 14:21:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      When you get this high you get that low later be careful
    | Posted on 2010-06-03 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]
      i know the feeling tooo..and you captured it well....let me know if you have anymore...
    | Posted on 2008-01-13 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      i kno the fealing i was an addict and i thought i had it under control well needless to say i did not i started shootin up coke and snortin haroin and lost my true love it was sposed to be seimpre but the drugs got inbetween i realized it ruined my life dont make the same mistake it only covers the hurt it dosnt fix it iv been addicted 4 5 years im only 19 and well u should quit while u still have ur life its almost killed me more than once now im blessed to be alive
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by bleeding_words | [ Reply to This ]
      poem's ok, but cocaine has an "e" on the end. sounds like it's causing stupidity more than pleasure.
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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