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    dots Submission Name: Following the Dragonsdots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    21/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 850/651/234
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 576
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    Description:
       This poem is more of a musing session then an actual
    poetic attempt but I like it :)


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    dotsFollowing the Dragonsdots
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    Today I follow the dragons
    Today, I'd say, all can vanish and all can be…displaced
    Such is love that worlds fly by but you stand still
    Such is love that people leave but dreams don't end
    And today I follow the dragons…my own flying thoughts
    And as fearless as they seem, as savage as they seem
    They never cease to call me home
    They always call me home
    Through sunflowers and wounded animals
    Their heights are noble
    And I never took my leave but I'm always leaving
    A halt would, stranger, water the flames and still the beasts
    It would be like the wounding of the wounded and
    Enslavement of the enslaved…
    I cannot still nor can I halt to tell you now
    The story of the skies I've passed
    But if you have a heart to share then I can welcome
    One more dragon




    Submitted on 2008-01-07 14:44:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice work!!! unexpected...its really good and when i first read the tittle i was thinkin it would suck!! but i gave it a chance and it blew me away....
    | Posted on 2008-01-13 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      Beyond there, they be Dragons he warned! And so there be dragons fraught in the imagination of mankind, fertile beasts they be, firing the muse of poets and warriors alike!!

    Your work is always stunning and hewn with brilliance, Sandra! Marvelous!
    | Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      You got something going here gurl. It needs a bit more polish but the concept is great. Feeling kinda homesick although you're home right? Be weary though, some dragons are dangerous and they lie too...
    | Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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