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    dots Submission Name: art filmdots
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    Author: fabulousAMY
    ASL Info:    21/Female/CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 159/159/61
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 267
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 768



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    Lifting the hello kitty band-aid you kiss my cuts
    on the base of my hand.
    Winter is about to wrap its hands around my neck.
    And even your warmth against my chest and collar,
    will not save us from the bleak season.

    The trees are bare and spiny,
    and the world is showing through a cool, green lens.

    We're like an art film.

    I poke you and pinch you,
    my arms always find their way around your body,
    because gripping onto you is what i do best.

    My scratches and bruises do not put you off.
    You bat away the bony fingers of this cold season,
    capturing me and my heart.

    We walk down the lush paths to the sunset.

    fin.




    Submitted on 2008-01-07 15:05:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good poem, but I didn't see the connection between art films & winter season...It kinda has an all-over-the-place feel to it

    But I liked the feeling it conveys..
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by Mark Huntsman | [ Reply to This ]



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