I'll Always Love You So by Frank Maguire

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Author:	Frank Maguire
ASL Info:	52 / UK
Elite Ratio:	2.26 - 1727/1248/246
Words:	156

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	254
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	917

Description:
An expression of love.

I'll Always Love You So dots

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When I can’t sleep, or when I weep
And my troubles I just see
Amidst my rain, I feel such pain
But you come and comfort me
When you are near, you kill my fear
And I want to let you know
Come night or day, in everyway
I’ll always love you so

When I feel sad, when times are bad
And my world just falls apart
When days I rue, and nights are blue
You brighten up my heart
Your manners such, your soothing touch
And you always seem to show
Such love on high, and that is why
I’ll always love you so

When I review my love for you
My heart still skips a beat
My eyes, they glow, I tremble so
As our time draws near to meet
When we embrace, your pretty face
Still sets my heart aglow
Through your blue eyes, I realise
I'll always love you so.

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  You are a master of love poems. The way you write , your rythmn, your choice of words. Such a masterful blend a great chef creating a tantalizing read to satisfy our souls. thank you, Jerilynn.
| Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by Jerilynn | [ Reply to This ]

Wow, this is Excellent

A superb poem; it flows so beautifully while reading it and portrays such gentle and genuine love for a loved one.

Very well written
...........and your feelings of gratitude and happiness are evident through every word........
you sure are quite talented in writing

.....this was short and sweet, and yet you have managed to fill in quite a lot, which is an art and appreciable.

Good work.
| Posted on 2008-01-22 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
  Outstanding love poem, that should make some lucky gal very happy! Frank, your poems are all so excellent that I feel like I'm just repeating myself everytime I make a new comment!

Outstanding work from Elite's master of verse!!!
| Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Absolutely amazing! I love your rhyming scheme and word choice. It's definitely unique!

Keep writing!

-Missa
| Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by musikismylife16 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wonderful! I love the poem, I love the rhyming pattern and the flow. However there is one area that threw me off a little.

"My eyes, they glow, I tremble so
As our time draws near to meet
When we embrace, your pretty face
Still sets my heart aglow"

The use of glow and aglow in the same stanza kind of stops the flow of the poem.I would suggest a different word for glow, like maybe shine.

"When I review my love for you
My heart still skips a beat
My eyes, they shine, I tremble so
As our time draws near to meet
When we embrace, your pretty face
Still sets my heart aglow
Through your blue eyes, I realise
I'll always love you so."

Just a suggestion.

Otherwise I love this poem it is very touching.
Great work.

♥Donna♥
| Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]

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