Description: This is realy just a free write that i wrote when i had to confront someone. I am open to all sugestiong to make it into a great poem, a better tittle is a good place to start.
Tired so tired
Exhausted so exhausted
Sleep is out of reach for my mind
to rest
stop
breath
shut down
I am plugged in
energy is surging
a shock that won’t end
but I won’t die.
When do I get to cry
when do I get to hide?
My heart is raw
my eyes are splitting
I will it to stop
3 hours before I cook
toss and rise from the ground
You are my only hope
Majestic Peace of Hearts go before me!
Hold me up from behind
Desperate in my need
Glory of Peace fill me
Glory of hope prepare my path
speak the words of truth
whisper instructions for me to yield
my 27 wisdom’s
are not enough for this life
You are 27x27 wisdom’s and more.
Rain down in this time
on my heart and hers’.
Amen
mmm...why is it called manipulation?
i dont quite get the last verse...
if you dont mind can you explain it to me?
the only thing i get is that the last verse is asking for hope, peace, wisdom from God...
i really like the 2nd verse...
"When do I get to cry
when do I get to hide?"
the beginning of the 1st verse really reflects my mind when i am tired and exhausted, i do tend to say it that way
"Tired so tired
Exhausted so exhausted"
"Sleep is out of reach for my mind
to rest
stop
breath
shut down"
somehow it is true that we cant run to sleep for relief when it is too much to bear, cant even fall asleep...
Submission Name: Manipulation
