Manipulation
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This is realy just a free write that i wrote when i had to confront someone. I am open to all sugestiong to make it into a great poem, a better tittle is a good place to start.
Manipulation
Tired so tired Exhausted so exhausted Sleep is out of reach for my mind to rest stop breath shut down I am plugged in energy is surging a shock that won’t end but I won’t die. When do I get to cry when do I get to hide? My heart is raw my eyes are splitting I will it to stop 3 hours before I cook toss and rise from the ground You are my only hope Majestic Peace of Hearts go before me! Hold me up from behind Desperate in my need Glory of Peace fill me Glory of hope prepare my path speak the words of truth whisper instructions for me to yield my 27 wisdom’s are not enough for this life You are 27x27 wisdom’s and more. Rain down in this time on my heart and hers’. Amen |
Submitted on 2008-01-07 19:46:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| mmm...why is it called manipulation? i dont quite get the last verse... if you dont mind can you explain it to me? the only thing i get is that the last verse is asking for hope, peace, wisdom from God... i really like the 2nd verse... "When do I get to cry when do I get to hide?" the beginning of the 1st verse really reflects my mind when i am tired and exhausted, i do tend to say it that way "Tired so tired Exhausted so exhausted" "Sleep is out of reach for my mind to rest stop breath shut down" somehow it is true that we cant run to sleep for relief when it is too much to bear, cant even fall asleep... | Posted on 2008-03-08 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ] | |
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