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    dots Submission Name: Mi Angeldots
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    Author: BigRed
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 50/52/40
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       My baby came from no where and set me free! We have been thru so much, and we go thru it together protecting and guiding each other.
    Samantha Caitlyn Gonzalez<3


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    dotsMi Angeldots
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    I truly fought the hurt
    An the feeling that I know.
    As we drove up the road of dirt.
    I wouldn't let it show.
    Nothing to decieve.
    I thought there was no one there.
    No reason to believe
    That someone watched and cared.
    Faith is what I once knew
    And I thought I had lost it all.
    Until the day I met you.
    When from Heaven you must have fall.

    Ahora encontré la fe
    Cuándo tu cayó del cielo
    Estoy enamordada con te
    Sé que tu es mi angel custodio

    I am so in love,
    And finally I see
    Because you came from above
    And you set me free.




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