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Two Apologetic Kisses Say That My

Author: icaughtfire591
ASL Info:    16/f/MI
Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 75 /74 /39
Words: 207
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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this poem is also known as lau[ren] part 4. it's about my girlfriend...i love her more than life, and i'm going to marry her someday.

Two Apologetic Kisses Say That My

...Mood Will Change Faster Than Your Eyes (the rest of the title wouldn't fit, oops)

Baby let’s go
Drive me anywhere
Put your foot down
On the gas pedal…now.
Take us away from here
As long as you’re near me
I could scream!
This white-knuckled driving
Is so enthralling..
Yeah, this will get us somewhere.
And where have we been?
You remind me yet again
How I love that you’d rather
Take your hands off the wheel
Than let go of mine.
So just how selfish am I?

Yes, there you go again.
I want to hear your engine roaring
At the speed of sex.
Tires spinning
Against the black asphalt
And where do we go to next?
Where do we fly to next?
Because this white-knuckled driving
Is fucking exciting…

Then we’ll run
to your bed,
Getting under the covers
Of night.
Baby baby baby…
This feels beyond right.
I haven’t felt this good in such a long time…
I’m standing on my roof
To scream to the whole world
That you are mine..
And when the morning unfurls
How I’m lost in your eyes,
(Those brown and sometimes
amber or hazel eyes…)

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