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    dots Submission Name: Undigging Toward The End.dots
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    Author: icaughtfire591
    ASL Info:    16/f/MI
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 75/74/39
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       lau[ren] part deux.


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    dotsUndigging Toward The End.dots
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    Melting, the cold steel of an abyssial nightmare..
    Darkest chasms of thought in my head
    Bleed out slowly,
    Fingers itching,
    Wrists begging,
    Pulsing veinly..
    You saved me
    Pulled me out
    Of this grave that I dug,
    While the spades and razors
    Danced the nights away
    Engraving our passion into my core.
    Endlessly, “I love you,” over the phone
    “Well, I love you more.”
    A smile unfolds on my lips
    And it’s never felt better before.




    Submitted on 2008-01-08 21:30:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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