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    dots Submission Name: secretly in lovedots
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    Author: lonelygal_212
    ASL Info:    17 f
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 8/13/12
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 843
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    dotssecretly in lovedots
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    when i see you i want to burst
    i want to start singing like theres no tomorrow
    i want to be the sun and shine down
    i want to jump for joy knowin that u might have recognized me
    i wish u knew exactly how i felt about u
    and i wish u felt the same i am when i see you
    it gives me goosebumps seeing you and having you say hi to me
    and just the way u look at me makes me feel like u want to be with me but i will never know because u wont share ur true feelings




    Submitted on 2008-01-09 09:45:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow thats really nice you should send this to the persons of its intent

    they should be quite pleased

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-01-09 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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