Hey!!! I met her. Maybe she's the one who gave me writers block. After being gone for a while, it's nice to see you got over your writer's overload. But back to the poem. The only thing I would change is in the last line; "Begging for more." Other than that, I'd leave it the same. But I believe Intricate1 is right that we all have a bit of her in us. However, who's to say that's a bad thing. I definately wouldn't mind seeing more of her. The Dark Angel of dreamer35717, truly a magnificent sight.
This was written very well. It flowed nicely, the rhyme was consistant, and the details made the imagery fantastic. But... There wasn't alot of emotion. I think you should add a bit, make the reader feel as if you have experienced this beauty firsthand. Tasted the kiss but got away before the fatal end. Instead if just passing down the beauty one generation to another. (that's how it seems) Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading