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    dots Submission Name: never that girldots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsnever that girldots
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    i've never been that girl who had the amazing things in life.

    i've always been that girl who got hurt and cryed herself to sleep at night.

    Never the girl to win the race.

    Always the girl to fall and get hurt.

    Never the girl who got an A.

    Always the girl who only did ok.

    I'm that girl who never wears a smile.

    Only because I have nothing to smile at.

    I'm just that girl who falls to hard to fast.

    And never is caught, just falls on her ass.

    I want to change that.

    I really do.

    I want to be the winner,

    I want to win that gold.

    I dont wanna fall and get hurt,

    I want to fall and know i can trust that person to never let me hurt




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      wow i really know what your sayin in this you have great disciption in this along with great feeling your a good writer and keep you head up you never know whats around the corner i would really love to read more of your poems when you post them and i hope you will read some of mine
    robbie
    | Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by robbie | [ Reply to This ]


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