Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Won't Someone Hear Me?dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 778
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 674



    Description:
       Poem that I wrote in response to a day, or better yet, a very long time since anyone has actually heard me.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWon't Someone Hear Me?dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Won’t someone hear me?
    Hear me through the stifled cries,
    Hear me through the rolling eyes,
    Hear me through the lonely sighs,
    That endlessly fill my world,
    Hear me through the untold lies,
    Hear me through the agreeing smiles,
    Hear me through the lows and highs,
    Hear me through the quiet objections,
    That I voice everyday,
    Hear me through the helping hand,
    Hear me through the gossiped tongues,
    Hear me through the internal screams,
    Hear me through the sleepless nights,
    Hear me through the lonely world,
    That has engulfed my life.
    Won’t someone please hear me?




    Submitted on 2008-01-09 19:01:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      It is most difficult to function in the midst of flows of people who do not recognize nor honor that fact that you exist and that you have thoughts and feeling to share. We all want to reach out and touch the hearts and minds of those around us and when we feel a lack of recptiveness it can be discouraging and damaging if not remedied.
    | Posted on 2008-01-16 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      its sweet simple and to the point yet it complex...i can't really describe this besides you did a really good job
    | Posted on 2008-01-13 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    155696

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry