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    dots Submission Name: It Sucks but its Truedots
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    Author: the heartless
    ASL Info:    15/male/LA
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 24/68/43
    Words: 249
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsIt Sucks but its Truedots
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    Earth sucks
    It fucks
    Ok screw rythming
    You wana know the damn point of this

    Life sucks, ok, it sucks
    If you wana kill yourself, whatever
    At times, I wana kill myself too
    Beat myself up, slamming my head against tables and walls
    Stabbing my arms and legs slitting my wrists

    Then I just lie there, stand there, I just freeze and wander, Am I really this weak
    Mabey, but then I see all those little mother fuckers who are going to hell
    That makes me relise, I still have a reason
    Its my job to show all these little fuckers they are going to hell so they can turn to God

    So all you idiots out there reading this, who think God is some played out shit, Fuck you
    Ok, do what you want, but listen, if you don't turn, your dead, thats it
    Believe what you want, I just want you to know the truth, I don't want you to believe what I believe, infact if this dose make you turn to God
    Don't Believe what others want you to believe, believe in God how you want to
    Just remember all you Drugies, Gays, Satanic/booda/ext. worshipers, you hookers, you sluts, you idiots that beat up your wives, you idiots that kill your husbands for money
    Your going to hell if you don't turn to God

    There, thats the truth, thats it
    After you know all of that, do whatever the hell you want




    Submitted on 2008-01-10 10:53:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've never been keen on the Christian teaching of 'you're all going to hell'. I fail to see why an 'all loving' God would want his children to love him out of fear.

    Gah. I never really get why there is a 'rant' and 'random thoughts' option for posting... Maybe your words would be more effective if written in a more creative style. As it stands not many people will take it seriously.
    | Posted on 2008-01-10 00:00:00 | by AteMyBackpack | [ Reply to This ]



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