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    dots Submission Name: Underground Railroad...dots
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    Author: Kersofmia
    ASL Info:    19/m/Mia
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 111/84/44
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 90
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1023



    Description:
        I wrote this when I was a little younger at a weird place in my life, things really weren't going my way but I kept my spirits up. I wrote this poem and recited in my head any time things got a little tough and it always made me feel better. I know it's not the greatest but I haven't the heart to change it.


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    dotsUnderground Railroad...dots
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    I walk down this road, even though no one walks behind or ahead,
    Instead, I keep my eyes on nothing else but the end,

    Pleasant thoughts I carry with me like weapons,
    For anything that comes before me neglecting,
    My happiness that I express, and none the less,
    I have learned how to suppress, everything else but the best,

    But sometimes I think this is a test,
    And so far I have had nothing but success,
    And even though thoughts can distort,
    And it can be hard to find support,
    I will never abort, the protection of my heart as if it was a fort,

    And that means from friends, family, and others,
    But I must keep in mind all of gods creatures are my brothers,
    So with my energy being positive, what can be my opposite?
    Nothing encouraging, only enemies discouraging,
    My efforts of being, that person who can keep freeing,
    A few more minds then my own, from these surrounding walls of stone…




    Submitted on 2008-01-10 23:26:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ahhh

    if your poem is reallly true and i am interpeting this correctly then we are very much the same...

    now down to the work above...its not very deep to me and no offense but in this line if "literature" we are to be teh deepest of the deep our work is supposedly the most inspiring,heartwrenching,and dark that there is

    so jsut form me you have a lot to work with because actually what youve written is pretty good i think that your stanzas could be a bit better and your description to....but hey

    im just a 13yr old so its your choice to listen

    thanks for the read

    -the girl who cried wolf to much
    | Posted on 2008-01-12 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]



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