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    dots Submission Name: Branded By Desiredots
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    Author: DemonicInk
    ASL Info:    21/F/Gypsie
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 29/10/28
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 208
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1453



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       I was horny, nuff said.


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    dotsBranded By Desiredots
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    Tear me apart inside
    Rip me open with your violent embrace
    Make me feel your anguish
    Fuck me raw and leave me bleeding
    I'll be begging soon for more

    Tighten your collar around my neck
    Tug me closer with my leash
    Brand me deeply with your kisses and
    Make me wholy yours

    Blood once mine is now ours
    This blade a covenant between us
    Drive yourself between my thighs
    Ease this itch with friction
    Pierce me deep within
    Rape my soul to heaven
    Fallen angel with demonic deceit
    Corrupter of this innocence

    Tear me apart inside
    Rip me apart with your violent embrace
    Make me feel your torment
    Fuck me raw and leaving me bleeding
    I'm begging you for more

    Twist me with your tongue
    Pour on me seduction
    Make me moan and scream
    I've become God and
    You are my addiction
    Can I deny my attraction?

    My soul yours with growls
    Rough and entirely animal
    I am yours, all claimed
    Collar binds me to you
    I am home

    Tear me apart inside
    Bite me till I scream
    Force me down and
    Fuck me hard
    Give me all this pleasure
    Make me yours forevermore
    Branded by bloody kisses
    I'm begging now for more
    Oh GOD give me more!




    Submitted on 2008-01-11 14:58:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      your right I did get this poem confused with a other one of your poems. And I was implying that you blamed god for the evil or pain just that it is how your write made me feel.
    Mekisha
    | Posted on 2008-01-12 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]
      well It was dark but a good write. this is how my soon to be X-husband makes me feel and I have always loved god. even through all sick and twisted things I have put my self through. even when I wanted to die I never blamed my lord only myself and my poor choices.
    but this was really touching.
    | Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]



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