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    dots Submission Name: Welcome To My Cursedots
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    Author: WhY-dO-yOu-CrY
    ASL Info:    17/F/ConnUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 131/79/78
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 152
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1003



    Description:
       My friend Katie has been having a real tough time, she's becoming like me. and i don't want that for her. I don't want her to become silent with no smile ever finding it's way onto her face.

    It's not really one of your tipica poems, where i'm trying to tell her to cheer up, i'm more like welcoming her. And yea you'll hopefully get it.


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    dotsWelcome To My Cursedots
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    Thinking,
    It's what i do best.
    Thinking too hard,
    Better than the rest.

    It's not always a gift,
    But a curse.
    Analyzing every rift,
    Within this herse.

    You gotta be able to tell,
    The lies from the truths.
    You gotta send everything to hell,
    And down through the roots.

    You wanna be a thinker,
    Mask your emotions and never hide.
    Fool them, and they will choose the weaker,
    To cause him pain, and make him dead inside.

    Keep your face stoic,
    As they torture him so.
    Let them have their pick,
    So you can go.

    And when your left alone,
    You can cry all you want.
    But never give them the bone,
    And never give in to the taunts.

    When you complete this test,
    You'll be a thinker like me.
    You'll be able to ward off the rest,
    Welcome to my curse, Katie.




    Submitted on 2008-01-11 15:25:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow! Now that was hottttt,

    I liked that so much, now your cooking on gas my dear.

    Jamar2
    | Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! Now that was hottttt,

    I liked that so much, now your cooking on gas my dear.

    Jamar2
    | Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
      awesome work........how did you come up with that! lol! jk! well keep writing i like....i wish i was that talented
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Kornfreakinabox | [ Reply to This ]
      This was awsome! I loved the flow, and again, it had a creepy, eery sensation to it that I loved. Good job
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]
      Maybe youse can lighten up with each other, even when treating the rest of the world like a cat treats a dog.

    | Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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