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    dots Submission Name: When all is lostdots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsWhen all is lostdots
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    When all is lost
    your hope,
    your courage,
    your love,
    your self,
    your work
    when you have nothing left to to lose
    keep on going because
    what do you have to lose
    except my life it self
    it just can't get any worse or can it
    well I will never know if I just give up
    so I will have to buck up cowgirl style
    and just make this life work for me
    instead of this life using me up and spitting me out
    I will move on and make my heart work again
    I will get the love of my life and keep it this time around I will give my all that is all that I have left.
    My Life




    Submitted on 2008-01-11 21:13:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That works. This one I kinda like. Is this one
    of the newer ones you were tellin me about?
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    | Posted on 2008-01-16 00:00:00 | by oononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]


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