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    Author: Brianna_rose
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 11/14/13
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    Thoughts of leaving, so sick of this place.
    The heart beating bodies, walking, talking and breathing the same.
    I lay here, just wanting some change, I'm not seeing any.
    It's all the same, were all the same.
    Watching it all go to an end, I'm happy, until I awaken.
    It was all just a dream.
    Sitting here in my own self-pity.
    Thinking why, why can't it just be easier?
    Easy in ways that I cannot explain.
    Hoping for a day, that will never come.
    The day that nobody else wants, is a day I'll finally be free.
    In my last words, whispering goodbye.




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