Description: Written because of a betrayal by a certain friend that we've been there for, done EVERYTHING for that we could...and he turns around and treats us like shit.
Betrayed (Fuck You Too) -------------------------------------------
You cast me aside
Bent on chasing an elusive dream
Throwing away those who stood by your side
While you were at your most low
For some GIRL who left you behind before
You trash a deep friendship
Shows me where I stand, doesn't it?
Below a piece of ass
Below where I was told BY YOU that I belong
You really know how to make a girl feel special
Wow, this one is intense, and that emotion definitely comes out blaring in this. I really like this piece, it flows well, its full of passion, and on top of that its just plain raw. Only small bit i'd personally like to see changed, is maybe the removal of the "NOT!" at the end, because the sarcasm of the previous stanza was pretty obvious, and I think the tone of the poem would benefit more by leaving off on a sarcastic line like "You really know how to make a girl feel special".
Submission Name: Betrayed (Fuck You Too)
