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    dots Submission Name: timedots
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    Author: ashik
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50/37/31
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotstimedots
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    Time

    Is…
    Moving constantly
    Standing still
    Evolving with out ceasing

    Is…
    Changing to fit
    the present
    Which has never caught the future


    Is…
    Past.
    A solid rock
    We all stand on

    Is…
    Future.
    A conditional promise
    To be given someone sometime

    Is…
    Present.
    Life not full,
    Preparation for what is to come

    Is…
    Motion,
    With freeze frame photography




    Submitted on 2008-01-12 15:29:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      reminds me of all the times i tripped in class waiting for time to move forward;time the enemy and friend to all

    youve written a piece taht every one can relate to whether it was intended or not

    one thing i liked about your writing,it might not be speacial BUT it caught my attention how you started the beginng of every stanza with IS...

    because time really just is,isnt it ?time IS everything that we are not ....immortal

    well thanks for the read

    -the girl who cried wolf
    | Posted on 2008-01-12 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]



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