time

Author: ashik Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50 /37 /31 Words: 69

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time

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Time Is… Moving constantly Standing still Evolving with out ceasing Is… Changing to fit the present Which has never caught the future Is… Past. A solid rock We all stand on Is… Future. A conditional promise To be given someone sometime Is… Present. Life not full, Preparation for what is to come Is… Motion, With freeze frame photography

Submitted on 2008-01-12 15:29:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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reminds me of all the times i tripped in class waiting for time to move forward;time the enemy and friend to all youve written a piece taht every one can relate to whether it was intended or not one thing i liked about your writing,it might not be speacial BUT it caught my attention how you started the beginng of every stanza with IS... because time really just is,isnt it ?time IS everything that we are not ....immortal well thanks for the read -the girl who cried wolf

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