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time


Author: ashik
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time



Time

Is…
Moving constantly
Standing still
Evolving with out ceasing

Is…
Changing to fit
the present
Which has never caught the future


Is…
Past.
A solid rock
We all stand on

Is…
Future.
A conditional promise
To be given someone sometime

Is…
Present.
Life not full,
Preparation for what is to come

Is…
Motion,
With freeze frame photography




Submitted on 2008-01-12 15:29:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  reminds me of all the times i tripped in class waiting for time to move forward;time the enemy and friend to all

youve written a piece taht every one can relate to whether it was intended or not

one thing i liked about your writing,it might not be speacial BUT it caught my attention how you started the beginng of every stanza with IS...

because time really just is,isnt it ?time IS everything that we are not ....immortal

well thanks for the read

-the girl who cried wolf
| Posted on 2008-01-12 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]


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