I like it, very imageful (not a word i know! :D hehe) I like it, very sad as well, makes me think of a book i read, i can't think of the title though, anyway good job!
Also thanks for the comment on Dear Amber/Sleep talking!
i really enjoyed the word choice and the imagery of this poem. I like how it gives all these open and free ideas contrasted with the talk of constraint, really gets the meaning across. To me, the transistion from the first stanza to the second (mainly the second beginning with to) is a little awkward to me when I read it. The end is great, just a well put sum of the theme. Again, I enjoyed