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    dots Submission Name: bugger offdots
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    Author: brokenmuse
    ASL Info:    26/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 756/734/161
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 592
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 743



    Description:
       This is just a rant. I am so sick of emo kids and so pissed off about people that are walking around in black thinking they are cool because they are "goth" or they are "cutters", or thinking that there are just so damn entitled to have someone give a crap because they didn't get a date to the damn prom or some other such bs.


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    dotsbugger offdots
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    so many say now
    what a tragedy it is
    all of these
    misbegotten
    unloved
    hopeless
    children around today
    so you want to cry
    to hurt yourself
    and have others hurt for you
    so selfish you sicken
    you wretched foolish child
    it is not a fucking tragedy
    it is nature taking
    it's own course
    so go on
    break away
    from your pain
    no one loves you
    anyway
    the weak will die out first
    those with no will
    to fight, to live
    fuck
    I say the real tragedy
    is that you made it this long
    when evolution should
    have stepped in to prevent
    even your illtimed conception




    Submitted on 2008-01-13 21:06:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I hope you feel much better after this diatribe directed at peopls who couldn't really give a rat's arse about how you view them.
    | Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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