This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -
 

  Off

Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password
Roleplay | Viral news today | Music Theory

Hate


Author: ashik
Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50 /37 /31
Words: 47
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
Total Views: 1210
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 333



Description:

Another blast from the past for me. Summer of 1995.


Hate


Skin and bones, dry and coarse
Hot and bothered
Puke yellow with purple
Rotten
Grimy spillage exiled with an order to kill
Screeching voices next to screaming violins
The rotten stench that makes you puke
Condensed hatred thrown together
Filed shard to the end





Submitted on 2008-01-13 23:49:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments



Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?		7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



155909

EliteSkills

  Roleplay
  Top News