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    Author: griffin
    Elite Ratio:    1.77 - 0/2/25
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 647



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    dotsSilencedots
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    I stood in the doorway
    waiting to hear
    the words most wanted
    baby I love you, stay near
    but instead a cold stare
    haunted
    the ghost like countenance
    you bore
    spoke volumes
    as I clung to the door
    hoping for a moment
    of brief repose
    you struck hard
    while my guard was down
    you led me down the path
    when you took my hand
    we flourished and we fought
    but finally in the end
    the world caught up
    I stand in the doorway
    waiting for the words
    but quietly and solemnly
    I leave the past behind




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