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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    18/f/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 270/315/89
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Them
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    dotsNotesdots
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    Here we are,
    Settin in class,
    I look to my sides,
    Everyones passing notes,
    I get out a pencil,
    Start to write,
    Not a silly little note,
    Wouldnt you like to know?
    Exactly what i wrote,
    Peer to my sides again,
    A note falls at my feet,
    "Hey whats up you loner?"
    How fucking sweet.




    Submitted on 2008-01-14 10:46:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've found myself writing notes to my self.. I keep them in a box and read them later on.. I can't tell if you enjoy being a loner or not. But either way it is a good write.

    see ya

    ~Kat~
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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