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    dots Submission Name: I knowdots

    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Mr. Ignis I came up with this one last night for you. Its not great but its all I could think up.

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    dotsI knowdots

    I know when I am loved and when not,
    I know that you do not care for me, not even in the slightest,
    I know that I was warned against you,
    I know why I ignored them all.
    I know that my heart is still fighting,
    I know that my heart has already lost.
    But at least I know that for however short in time, somewhere, somehow, you loved me.

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