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    dots Submission Name: What Ifdots

    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 601
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       A very random thought that really came from nowhere. I can't say much more than that, since it caim from looking at the snow all day.

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    dotsWhat Ifdots

    What if
    spring doesn't follow

    What if
    life doesn't always mean

    What if
    failure is a form of

    What if
    hurt is an expression of

    What if
    the world revolves around

    Submitted on 2008-01-14 12:50:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this. It is very provocative; I think that the most gripping questions are the what if's that sneak up on you and keep you up at night. It almost makes me think of the song Life is Beautiful, in the beginning when he is talking about how you can't live until you die and you can't learn to tell the truth until you learn to lie. I love that song and have been listening to it over and over so manybe that is the only reason that I see the connection. Oh, well. Very interesting write!
    | Posted on 2008-01-15 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]
      I was very intrigued and wonder what you mean by the ending...What is the world revolves around it?..What is "it"? I didn't understand the "what if failure is a form of pain" part because failure does bring pain, depends on the degree of failure. If it's a history test or something then I guess but if it's something serious...doesn't it bring pain already?
    | Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by Caity | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this! What is God wasn't perfect ? I would love life anyway!!! Thanks!!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by Reva Laine | [ Reply to This ]

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