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    dots Submission Name: Warmth of BEINGdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 585
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif


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    dotsWarmth of BEINGdots
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    The warmth you bring
    to my inner BEING
    Your beauty shines
    through ALL I'm seeing

    Brilliant hues
    Beaming blues

    Golden fall leaves
    still clinging to trees

    My winter season
    not cold nor bare
    You are my green valley
    and I'm running through you there

    Sunset glitters gold
    living story told

    Reflected grace
    Smiling face




    Submitted on 2008-01-14 15:34:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      All I can do is reinforce what the guys are saying above me. Very poetical, lyrical and as smooth as silk.

    Much like the person you are writing this for I presume !!!

    Smiley.
    | Posted on 2008-01-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh joyous day! The daughter of light has
    spoken poetry!

    With a flash of love, she pierces our hearts. I run with my heart in my hand to the Nile. I meet her there, and we swim the flood.

    ---------------

    Tiff, so good to read some more wonderful, beautiful poetry from you. You always put some sunshine into our day.

    Thank you, light daughter.

    | Posted on 2008-01-15 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow Tiff, I really do love you, this is beautiful and honest, tender and loving. I much admire you and wish more others were like you.
    | Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      You are surely my favorite lyrical naturalist Tiffany. You always find the right words to paint your mural of sights and sounds.
    | Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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