Warmth of BEING by Epiphany

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Submission Name: Warmth of BEING dots

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Author:	Epiphany
ASL Info:	38/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:	4.38 - 3166/2056/361
Words:	60

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	178
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	469

Description:
love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share

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Warmth of BEING dots

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The warmth you bring
to my inner BEING
Your beauty shines
through ALL I'm seeing

Brilliant hues
Beaming blues

Golden fall leaves
still clinging to trees

My winter season
not cold nor bare
You are my green valley
and I'm running through you there

Sunset glitters gold
living story told

Reflected grace
Smiling face

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  All I can do is reinforce what the guys are saying above me. Very poetical, lyrical and as smooth as silk.

Much like the person you are writing this for I presume !!!

Smiley.
| Posted on 2008-01-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh joyous day! The daughter of light has
spoken poetry!

With a flash of love, she pierces our hearts. I run with my heart in my hand to the Nile. I meet her there, and we swim the flood.

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Tiff, so good to read some more wonderful, beautiful poetry from you. You always put some sunshine into our day.

Thank you, light daughter.

| Posted on 2008-01-15 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow Tiff, I really do love you, this is beautiful and honest, tender and loving. I much admire you and wish more others were like you.
| Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
  You are surely my favorite lyrical naturalist Tiffany. You always find the right words to paint your mural of sights and sounds.
| Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

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