The Heart's Tale by D-Ink

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Submission Name: The Heart's Tale dots

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Author:	D-Ink
Elite Ratio:	1.38 - 81/59/58
Words:	43

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	875
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Description:
a poem i wrote without relating it to someone.

The Heart's Tale dots

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The mention of your name sends spastic shivers down my spine;
The candyrush; the motivation.
I need.
I leapt once -
With your shadows within me,
Now that I've landed -
Why does it still feel like
It's void of something?

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.